you made me origami and we fell like folded satellites to the sound of the rain in the gutter-- what was it that you did that made me fold into tin foil origami? i Kusudama bloom and Crane wings into orbit-- bend my tail into a skull and let my wings blink red and white-- to be mistaken for sea-sick stars-- did you crease me tight enough to make it through the atmosphere of another planet? this is why we fold with metal-- take pictures of the planets-- our sisters who wear the rings of their husband to bed and take off everything else in a full length mirror also known as the palms of our hands we lens voyeurs who fold ourselves coiled as Lotus and and Kawasaki roses that keep pivoting until they become another planet-- we sat together to watch Saturn undress and I told you not to take pictures-- watched her standing in front of that mirror-- smug with her own brass creases and the sound of rain or sleet on her shoulders-- collected her moons around her belly like marble-bubble soap-- this is the sound of a rain gutter and the haunt of another car pulling out fingers over the asphalt-- the thrash of the corn when she's lonely and wishing someone would take her picture again-- everyone wants to be watched in the mirror-- everyone wonders what they could fold themselves into if they had enough brass or tin foil-- or hands that could remember patience was brass and coronet-- flap Crane wing of bronze and rain-- pull me loose in ribbons from the brown hair of the clouds-- make the night sky modest again so Saturn can learn to not make such a show of undressing-- she should leave her comets on until we're done crawling back into the star boxes where we belong-- i folded Cranes in silver and gold paper on my night stand when i was ten. i counted them by the brown paper bag-full because i had wanted one-thousand-- enough to wing-beat the glimmer of the moon-- enough to challenge the quantity of visible stars-- enough to send on quests to take pictures-- jostle past satellites stealing wing-beat and flashbulb-- enough to weld the torn sternums of her rings-- balance moons in this orbit-- forgive me for traveling so far just to fold something for you-- we don't fold paper-- we fold forged in brass and hedge clippings off the over grown moons who act like vines when you get close enough to asking Saturn what her real name is-- but yes we were left here to bloom in Kusudama and Crane wing-- welded to the constant turning of the rain in the gutter-- we didn't need paper-- we were just counting the satellites that get mistaken for queasy stars-- jostled by Saturn's nightly display-- look at her sway she look just like you and me-- another Kawasaki rose-- turned and turned tight watch face-- in a rain gutter--